tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12126432.post111626688797275842..comments2023-10-29T03:07:29.951-05:00Comments on left cheek: Sand Castles & Snow Forts, part deuxjasdyehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17492591447246532970noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12126432.post-1116360638147170712005-05-17T15:10:00.000-05:002005-05-17T15:10:00.000-05:00"dainty"?? how could i NOT take that the wrong wa..."dainty"?? how could i NOT take that the wrong way? come up to humboldt park, i'll show you 'dainty.'<BR/><BR/>*lifts up both arms a la Popeye as if a real threat to anyone*jasdyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492591447246532970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12126432.post-1116360224479253712005-05-17T15:03:00.000-05:002005-05-17T15:03:00.000-05:00Pome! Pome! Pome!I see the symbols of a savior sub...Pome! Pome! Pome!<BR/><BR/>I see the symbols of a savior sublty ensconsced in the simple science of the serenade.<BR/><BR/>SssSSssss...<BR/><BR/><BR/>Don't take this the wrong way, but it's a very dainty poem.<BR/>Good Stuff.Puddleglumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361253021933534196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12126432.post-1116303921379017572005-05-16T23:25:00.000-05:002005-05-16T23:25:00.000-05:00chris,Yeah, i actually have to revert my eyes ever...chris,<BR/><BR/>Yeah, i actually have to revert my eyes everytime i see your stick figure. y'know, "the first look is a must, the second is a lust."<BR/><BR/>wasn't keeping up w/ email counts (THIS time), but looking forward to it. any writing by the estimable Christine Barnes (whom I get all my advice from) is certainly anticipatory.<BR/><BR/>i hope (nay, pray) it goes over well. some of them are just looking at it for the first time tonight. we'll see if it's flowable on saturday night. i could do it easy. not to brag. but it'll be a first for them, to try spoken word. and only a small percentage have seen or heard much, if any, so...<BR/><BR/>just finished and upped a post i started friday. i'm gonna need to link it. <BR/><BR/>peace, and thanks,<BR/>j.jasdyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492591447246532970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12126432.post-1116301589128201662005-05-16T22:46:00.000-05:002005-05-16T22:46:00.000-05:00Well 'of' me to death mon frere, I love it! The po...Well 'of' me to death mon frere, I love it! The poem's now a unified voice, and flows much better. It's great and the kids are going to do great things with it for their performance. It almost comes off like a song, which is good. It'll resonate in the minds of the audience. <BR/><BR/>'Christine Barnes brought up a good point'...ugh! Sounds like I'm some professional who gives writing advice or something. Ick! Hee hee, actually I kinda dug the way it sounded. I'm just going to act modest about it :)<BR/><BR/>I owe you an email, btw. Which you already know but I'm just reminding myself.<BR/><BR/>lol @ my linkage on here now. Faaaaantastic! You know you love the stickyness of that stick figure. She's hotter than me unfortunately.Revolthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02665665176691248694noreply@blogger.com